Not bad
You have a nice style. But you should have made the text into an animation.
Not bad
You have a nice style. But you should have made the text into an animation.
yeah man never tought of that :P
Huh?
I didn't really get the point, but the drawings were pretty cool. Next time, try to work on a bit more storyline.
it doesnt need one, haha a muslim gets a letter in her letterbox, nuf sed
Mmmm...
Of course, it wasn't THAT bad, but there's much room for improvement. Example: work on your perspective. The elevator doesn't fit the scene because it's not drawn in the same perspective as the rest.
Improve, improve...
Its only a trailer. In main movie I will IMPROVE all details.
O yeah
Everything for a Heineken! :D
Well eh, I'm not giving a ten because then it can't be better (abd it can, but I don't know how :P), but I must say I liked the way you displayed the movement of the characters very detailed.
Not bad
I must say I can barely believe you drew the characters yourself, cause they look just like the real ones. But I was actually expecting something not related to Happy Tree Friends (because somebody always dies, and in your movie the same thing happened). Lots of reviewers say this, but I say it again: work on your originality.
I wasn't planning to release this on Newgrounds; I was just going to on deviantART. Only reason I made this was to show why the whole FlakyxFlippy thing wouldn't work, which is completely DOMINANT on dA. That, and I'm not very good with storylines.
Thanks for the comment!
Like the low quality bothers me...
I don't care about the quality, it's just the movie: it was extremely entertaining and great to watch, awesome graphics and nice (sound) effects and music. I noticed the guy with the gun looks like Prince of Persia: The Two Trones (especially when he uses the chain and when his arm turns red). I don't know who the guy at the ending is, probably because I haven't seen Solid Sticks, but I'm sure you've got a great storyline going.
I must say, you're an excellent animator, you'll get far going the animating way. Keep working, and you'll be well-known in seconds. Good job.
watching solid sticks will fix the missing pieces tho (insert self-promotion here) Hmm i never played Prince of Persia tho. I always thought Magnum looks like Mick Thompson from slipknot with the hair of Orochimaru from Naruto, but they were designed way before so everything is coincidential ---end rant here -- LOL. Thanks for the comments!
Commander Keen?
Except for the space rocket I don't see any elements of Commander Keen. Anyway, great job!
That's why I wrote that it's DEDICATED, not ABOUT commander keen.
I liked it.
I think is was very good for a first submission. THe smoke and blurry movement effects were very well drawn. Only some sound is missing.
Thanks, I'm glad you liked my effects. I love animating effects. I'll see if I can work on getting some sound for you.
Cool!
Liked it alot... well, that; s it :P
you need wiew the series madness, is a great serie
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