It's a shame how the intro sounds so melodic with the piano and stuff, and then all of a sudden you go bing-bang-boom with your wobbles. :)
So the first thing I noticed is that this song isn't the typical facemelting dubstep you get when you search for it on NG or YT. And that's a good thing, because hearing the same thing over and over again makes you tired after a while. It just sounds more laidback than the usual dubstep. I'm pretty sure the choirs and the piano give it this effect as well.
I loved the reverb you had on the snare. I've come pretty close to recreating such a high-shelfed damping reverb but never got the right sound for it. Seems I should try a little harder next time. :P
Only aspect that could be improved is the ending. At 2:18 the choir kicks in and I thought 'Okay, this is the outro, cool', and then you bring the beat back? It would've been better if you'd just repeat the choir and fade out slowly. Or do what dj-Jo said, whatever.
Great song, dude, great song. I recently submitted my first dubstep track for Madness Day as well and figured I had a chance of winning, but now I've completely lost that feeling. xD
5/5, 9/10, faved. Seems I get laid next week, don't I?